Connie's World
Tuesday 19 May 2015
Sunday 17 May 2015
Li to make interesting story
The green slime OOZED from its mouth and down its skinny, bony body. The smell from its putrid mouth was seeping into my skin. It took two steps towards Kinston, then he bashed it to the grown
it screamed it opens its body it has thousands of little arms wiggling every wear.
Kinston piled a dagger out of his pokit and stabbed it in the hart it was 99% dead
but there was a dragon it let him ride it
The green slime OOZED from its mouth and down its skinny, bony body. The smell from its putrid mouth was seeping into my skin. It took two steps towards Kinston, then he bashed it to the grown
it screamed it opens its body it has thousands of little arms wiggling every wear.
Kinston piled a dagger out of his pokit and stabbed it in the hart it was 99% dead
but there was a dragon it let him ride it
Sunday 10 May 2015
Imagine you are a famous artist who has just spent a year overseas painting wolves. A TV station comes to interview you, to talk about what your year was like and to ask about your paintings.
Write down the interview- What will the interviewer say? What will your answer be?
Use this space for planning:
i used my imagination time and skill
i believed i could do it
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Then write your interview belev where did you go to canada what did you see wolf’s
did you paint them yes why did you pant wolves because they are rare when did you come back a week ago what did you paint with watercolor paints why to me it’s easier
what are you going to do with the paintings sell them for $100 what wolfs did you paint snow wolfs
Tuesday 5 May 2015
Imagine you are helping an old blind woman to sort out her pictures. As you pick out a picture of 2 people walking at night under streetlights, she begins to tell you a story. What story does she tell about the 2 people in the picture? What does the old woman look like? What kind of house are you in? What does the house look like? What is around you? What can you see, feel, smell, hear? How do you describe the painting to the woman (remember, she is blind).
Remember to use interesting describing and doing words. ‘Show, not tell’.
Use this space to plan what you will write
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Beginning: nana brick house cracked
Middle: pretty old artist pitcher room
End: story about her daughter and son
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Then start your writing here: at my nana’s house the place is cracked old and next to a river
she is pretty a good artist then we went to her art room she talked about one pitcher it was her son and daughter got married
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